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re-do of the month

you can see the original a few posts down. I do like this one better, a few tweaks are needed before I’ll consider it for the portfolio.


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5 Responses to “re-do of the month”

  1. Frizz says:
    08/29/2008 at 8:11 AM

    I like the changes. The kitty is funny!

  2. johanna says:
    09/01/2008 at 11:56 AM

    This is great! Love the lady detail on the boat!

  3. Dee says:
    09/03/2008 at 9:19 AM

    OOh, I can definitely see a story here! Wonderful movement, and I like the technique you used for the sky.

    I’d consider showing more of the jolly roger and telescope, but that’s just me.

    Wonderful, playful piece Court. Can’t wait to see what you post next!

  4. Tom Barrett says:
    09/04/2008 at 8:49 AM

    Great improvement over the first version. If I may offer some suggestions… perhaps pull the boat back a bit so the telescope does not bleed off the edge. Also, you might consider flipping the whole illo so that it flows from left to right, like a book would be read. Other than that, I think it looks awesome!

  5. Dee says:
    09/16/2008 at 12:31 PM

    Hey you! How is your sister? Has she had much damage from the storm? I know it swept over Huntsville, and there were tornadoes and flooding in east Tx. Hope she’s okay!